RED Prologue - Page 1 - TAKE TWO

Looking back, my first attempt at this page was a huge flub. I decided to try going all-digital with my backgrounds and gave this page another shot. It could be better, but I'm much happier with this one. I'm going to go ahead and start the next few pages, and just run with it. I'm having my usual issue of trying to think and plan everything, when my plan for this project is to just go with it! So I'm gonna go with it and start on my next page as soon as possible!
Anyway, comments are appreciated! Thanks!

Oh, also, I used 's Photoshop Painting Brush Set! Namely the clouds! Go check him out, he's fantastic!